Magazine Layout Development 10

Magazine Pages April 27th by DanielleMuntyan on Scribd

Feedback from Editorial Designer Jade Connolly:

Spread 4: great!! I love how your body flows from your title
Spread 5: widow – 1st paragraph (looks so much better aligned to the bottom!!)
Spread 7: widow – 7th paragraph
Spread 23: try to make the title directly in the middle of the top of the page and the start of the body
Spread 24: widows on 2nd and 7th paragraphs
Spread 26: widow on the right column, 4th paragraph
All the good American stuff is GREAT!!! Fab layout! Everything seems perfect from there onwards!